And B if for brutal. As in Shelley Watters pitch contest is brutal, so any feedback would be appreciated. And if you want to sign up, I don't think it's too late. The prize is a full ms request from Suzie Townsend.
Pitch 1: If Bridget can't rid herself of a charming demon, he will destroy the boy she's loved her whole life in a mystical fire.
Pitch 2: Bridget must rid herself of a charming demon in order to save her boy next door and rekindle their passion.
Pitch 3: If Bridget can't expose the truth behind the secrets, a charming demon will destroy the boy she loves.
Best of luck! Just wanted you to know that you're the reason I signed up for the A to Z Challenge! I first saw it here on your blog! Thanks!! http://pawnyspen.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteI am loving the lilac colors of your blog! New follower here, nice to meet you! Good luck with your *brutal* contest!
ReplyDeleteKarenG
I like Pitch 3 the best. It gives a better sense of the stakes and what Bridget must overcome to save the love of her life.
ReplyDeleteI like three best also. But...I'd like to hear something stronger than "exposing the secrets" -- is that what the demon demands for not destroying the boy? I get the stakes--the boy is in danger. But what exactly does Bridget have to do to save him? Sell her soul? Kill the demon? Walk on the wild side? (You get my drift. LOL). Tell us what Bridget has to overcome! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI think I'll also have to go with pitch 3. More intrigue
ReplyDeleteNumber three for me! Best of luck for the challenge.
ReplyDeleteEllie Garratt
Wow, believe Bridgett has a brutal and bruising bruhaha brewing, begging her to broach a bodacious bombshell.
ReplyDeleteGregg Metcalf
Colossians 1:28-29
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Best of luck with the contest!!! Pitch 3 sounds like the best out of the three. Good luck.
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